Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Id



Primitive
As ochre reddened lips.

Urgent
As lovers separated.

Energetic
As waves that crash on the shore.

Unrealistic
As drinking gravel through a straw.

Innate
As a cavernous crumple on a seaman’s face.


From B's five word Friday list:

Crash

Crumple

Straw

Gravel

Ochre

2 comments:

Ken Cross said...

Happy belated B'day - I didn't know!

Ken Cross said...

Did you walk today?